How I would write the first two minutes of "Journey's End"

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29 June 2008 @ 10:57 pm

The Doctor: Stops glowing only to look exactly the same. He collapses to the floor and stares, blinking, up his three companions. "Um, Am I ginger?"

Donna and Jack: Stare at him in awe and confusion

Rose A huge smile spreads across her face. Her voice cracks as she speaks. "No, you're still sort of brown." She then flings herself on top of him and clings. Massive hugging and snogging occur.

*cut scene to somewhere else on Earth*

The Daleks: "Exterminate!" Massive death and destruction "Exterminate!"

*cut scene back to the TARDIS*

The Doctor and Rose: Still clinging and snogging

Donna: Just stands there, mouth hanging open

Jack: "Ahem"

The Doctor and Rose Ignore them both and continue to snog

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starlightmoonla on June 29th, 2008 03:35 am (UTC)

Hee!! I really like this! :D

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svanderslice on June 29th, 2008 12:50 pm (UTC)

Thanks. :)

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honorh on June 29th, 2008 04:11 am (UTC)

Funny thing is? I think that top portion is just about what's going to happen. Maybe not the snogging, but I somehow don't think we're due for another Doctor just yet.

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svanderslice on June 29th, 2008 12:49 pm (UTC)

I think that top portion is just about what's going to happen

I think so too, that or Martha's special "Never use this" Key is somehow going to reverse everything. They did that last year though, so I hope not.

Maybe not the snogging,
I know, *pouts* which is why I wrote it here. :)

Edited at 2008-06-29 12:50 pm (UTC)

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vinceliav on June 29th, 2008 05:33 am (UTC)

I came to a really good thought while talking to jill...Think of jenny. We all blew it off as cheesy at the time, because she supposedly regenerated to the same form... Well....maybe they were giving us hope. :D

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svanderslice on June 29th, 2008 12:51 pm (UTC)

Yes. I refuse to believe that the BBC could possible keep that a complete secret. David is not done with us yet.

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sunnytyler001 on June 29th, 2008 07:34 am (UTC)

Yep, that's what's going to happen! Totally!

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svanderslice on June 29th, 2008 12:51 pm (UTC)

absolutely. :)

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senry on June 29th, 2008 10:15 am (UTC)

yes that is aculty perfect....

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svanderslice on June 29th, 2008 12:51 pm (UTC)

Why thank you very much. I thought so too. :)

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lachrimtov on June 29th, 2008 01:12 pm (UTC)

Watched it, seriously am a wreck... I love your RTD icon, the bastard.

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svanderslice on June 29th, 2008 01:13 pm (UTC)

seriously am a wreck
I think those were my words exactly when you called last night. :)
And yes, he is, but I love him anyway.

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sneakyangel on June 29th, 2008 01:34 pm (UTC)

I like it!!! *crosses fingers and hopes that will happen*

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svanderslice on June 29th, 2008 01:35 pm (UTC)

I doubt it, but it would be sooo nice. :)

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sneakyangel on June 29th, 2008 01:37 pm (UTC)

I love re-written scenes like that. After Doomsday a friend of mine re-wrote THAT scene, and it STILL made me cry.

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svanderslice on June 29th, 2008 01:39 pm (UTC)

I love them too. Different possibilities are so much fun. I did write an alt ending to Doomsday a while back if you'd like to read it.
http://svanderslice.livejournal.com/4663.html

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